Review
The article talks about the comparison in health within the many California Counties, with an emphasis on the Santa Clara County's rank. The article dose little to inform the reader about what impacts the health within those counties but rather is staked with numbers and percentages that denominate the subcategories of what creates the health ranks. Although the issue of health is brought up, which is something current and in important with health being a common subject for talk, the impact of the information is drowned out by the under-expansion of the subject and the methodology in which the categories were collected.




Sally Lehrman – Apr. 5, 2012 - 02:16 PM
This is a thoughtful review about what you see as missing from the article, and you provide good evidence. In the future, take extra care proofreading so your spelling and punctuation is correct. What are the science news values reflected in the story?