Arson Investigation Unit May Face Cuts

Towson Patch by Bryan P. Sears | Mar. 30, 2011 (News)

Changes could be coming to a Baltimore County arson investigation unit praised by union officials as a successful model for other fire departments throughout the nation and in Europe. Full Story »

Posted by Mary Hartney - via Patch - Towson

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J.F. Venecia
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 by J.F. Venecia - Mar. 30, 2011

The quotes are not very strong and I believe the writting can be tightened, especially towards the end about the budget cuts. It could be condensed. The quotes seemed to be empty and have no real information behind it.

“The chief has not made any decisions and the department is not ready to release any details.”

If there not any details, why have a quote explaining there are no details? The author could have just explained it himself.

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