Another New Jersey police spokesperson, Julian Castellanos, noted that "it's a wide open area and there are hunters in the area." Castellanos explained that the bullet had hit the house in vicinity of the attic; it "hit the vinyl siding and fell to the ground" without penetrating the vinyl, he said. Full Story »
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Textbook journalism. Get out there and check the facts, and get the facts. Thoroughly hyper-linked. Dobbs' claims could have gone on and on, but it takes just one journalist doing her job to put stop to the bull.
I like that she actually had a good attention grabber, it brought me in plus the title. It had a good nut graph which was concise in one paragraph brief. The only one thing that I did not like was how she interviewed Sergeant Stephens Jone and said "by interviewing yesterday on phone" it was not necessary to write only the fact that you interviewed by phone is fine. The ending was really good and with a quote.
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