Sally Lehrman
Member (since February 2009)I teach journalism courses and also maintain my work as an independent journalist covering science and social issues for a variety of print, Web and broadcast outlets.
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I’m sad to learn that Margulis has died. She was featured in one of the radio documentaries I worked on, called The DNA Files. She had such thought-provoking ideas. Both the news values you mention are on target, plus evolution has currency — ... More »
The story is well-done in terms of its unusual, and surprising content. The fact that it claims to redefine a whole phylum is something surprising, as well as exciting. However, it does not influence a large population of people economically or socially. The story does highlight who the importance pertains to, mainly scientists who are interested in tracing the roots that led to animal diversity.
Good analysis of the news values involved.
Timeliness: This is a very recent article, written today (4/3), but the cause of the dolphins' deaths was because of the BP oil spill in 2010. Impact: There is little that can be done about the dolphins' deaths because they are already dead. As scientists perform the autopsies, hopefully they will devise a way to prevent more deaths. Currency: Prominence: Proximity: Although California is some distance from the Gulf, I chose this article because it is about an hour's drive from away Houston, my hometown. Unusual/Surprising: I can't say that I didn't see this coming. Given the amount of oil that BP spilled, the only surprise to me is that it took this long for animals to start dying from the oil.
Good points. But doesn’t “impact” extend beyond the actual dolphin deaths? What does knowing about their illness tell us about what can be done in the future?
Very good. Double-check your grammar and punctuation for best presentation and credibility.
This article discusses the new plan regarding the California High Speed Train. The author details many of the details listed in the proposal, specifically that the new plan can cut nearly 30 billion dollars. Environmentally, the High-Speed Rail would reduce carbon emissions by three million tons. The high speed rail affects many Californians, especially people living in Silicon Valley. There are many people who are for and against this proposal. Opponents argue that it is too expensive and won't be paid for, while proponents say that it will benefit the environment as well as traffic. The article should have included the sources of the speculated environmental benefits as well as how those projections were derived. The author ... More »
Thoughtful and specific review. Be sure to proofread for capitalization errors in the future.
The article talks about the comparison in health within the many California Counties, with an emphasis on the Santa Clara County's rank. The article dose little to inform the reader about what impacts the health within those counties but rather is staked with numbers and percentages that denominate the subcategories of what creates the health ranks. Although the issue of health is brought up, which is something current and in important with health being a common subject for talk, the impact of the information is drowned out by the under-expansion of the subject and the methodology in which the categories were collected.
This is a thoughtful review about what you see as missing from the article, and you provide good evidence. In the future, take extra care proofreading so your spelling and punctuation is correct. What are the science news values reflected in the story?
You make a good point about relevance, so back it up. Why is it relevant to our time? What other news measures (like timeliness, prominence, proximity, etc.) do you see reflected here? Be sure to give evidence for your claims. Also check punctuation and spelling. I like your idea of ... More »
This story is good science news because even though its filled with estimates, there were some numbers that truly got its point across, but also were true scientific measurments. The second sentence about the 6 degrees Celsisus increase was the most scientific and overall its message was on a scientific subject, global warming. It had prominence and surprising figures and discussed a debated subject, thus is qualifies as newsworthy as well.
Good job identifying the reasons this piece was newsworthy, and also using specific examples to back up your points. Please take extra care with spelling and punctuation.






Email and web use 'to be watched'
This story is an interesting one for me becuase I agree with both sides. I feel it is the duty of the policymakers to protect their citizens as best they can and with rapid developments in technology, the government is able to gain more access to phones, websites, emails, texts, etc. On the other hand, this is an invasion of privacy and people feel uncomfortable with this sort of monitoring. The society is not accepting of the new technological developments however, I think when used appropriately, it will benefit the society as a whole.
Interesting points. Is it the technology that society does not accept, or the use of technology for security purposes? It seems that the public is presented with a difficult choice: Use the technology and accept the invasion of privacy, or don’t use the technology and lose its benefits.