It is unfortunate the auther could not reach the analysts for comments. This information would have definitely helped the story. Regardless, it was very interesting.
Olivia Stephens
Member (since March 2011)I am a sophomore at Towson University studying mass communication and broadcasting
The author had some good sources along with some excellent photos. I think she could have trimmed the story length wise.
The sources do not seem reliable and the story does not seem to contain substantial facts or evidence to back up the claims it is making.
The article is concise and well-written. The interviews of the transgender community are good. It would be interesting to hear from people that oppose the bill
I think this is good journalism. The author included a lot of things about Schaefer's personality. It is also well written.
There are some good facts in the story but I would have liked to seen some better sources. This article is helpful for people looking for employment opportunities.
No, not really. The author could have found more credible sources. Also, the author probably should have gotten quotes or feedback from some immigrants to show both sides to the story.





I feel sorry for Polis that she can't truly be herself because she might get attacked and bullied. It is sad that there are people that can't accept other people for who they are.