The opening of the article is light and intriguing. The first paragraph’s way of revealing the subject of the article is clever. Quotes from participants are used a lot through the article. The personal accounts of the journey make the article more personal, entertaining, and inspirational.
Lucy Bondy
Member (since September 2009)Lucy Bondy is a full time student at Eastern Michigan University, currently enrolled in the Journalism department. She joined NewsTrust as a chance to actively participate in the news.
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This is an interesting and small article. The subject matter is odd and should hold interest of readers because of that. The simple wording and explanations made the article an easy read.
This article is straight forward and offers readers with easy access to information about the game. The frequent use of quotes allow a inside perspective. The light opening and descriptive writing offers the reader a clear idea of what occurred.
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This is a long, but informative article. The way the author writes provides good background information for those with little knowledge on the subject. The closing statement of the article is clever and offers a unique view. Dies ist eine lange, aber informativen Artikel. Die Art und Weise schreibt der Autor eine gute Hintergrund-Informationen für Personen mit wenig Wissen über das Thema. Die Abschlusserklärung des Artikels ist die intelligente und bietet einen einzigartigen Blick.
This article offers a fresh view on current issues. The addition of the reader’s e-mail offers an interesting personal aspect.




