There has to be a more interesting angle to cover heat waves than, "It's hot out." But it seems most news sources are sticking to tips to stay safe and talking to the same doctors.
Lauren Slavin
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This is a well-written story that could have almost been split into several different stories: Who is the new director of the Contemporary? What's new for the museum? How can this museum survive in Baltimore's art scene?
The original reporting done by The Sun was outstanding and the very definition of "good journalism." Good to see follow-up. With stories such as these, you wish you could hear the voice of the silent victim, but how do you get to those sources?
“These investigations are a lot tougher than any other investigation,” said McWhite, who previously investigated homicides and shootings, but not sex crimes. ... More »
“A lot of the folks who buy snowballs are kids. It’s hard to imagine a kid wanting a gourmet lemon verbena/kaffir lime/spearmint syrup flavor on a snowball—or ... More »
The fact that the author could be a subject in her own story is a bit too close for comfort. If the writer liked to blog or was interested in media or medical trends, that's one conflict of interest journalists can usually put aside to learn more on a subject. But this story only quotes bloggers, not their doctors or families, who may not see blogging as a healthy way to communicate as opposed to in person visits. It's a great feature that's well-written, but needs a more balanced writer.
Thorough analysis of a silly story. Now to find the plankers who have been arrested or injured and talk to them!
This is a great start to a story that needs to explore the uprising of local sites like Patch and the downward slope of newsrooms because of budget cutbacks. But I think I'm only seeing part of a longer version, which I don't want to discount as not covering all its bases.
I wonder how officials running for office are looking into public transportation. That might add some context to the Op-Ed.
Even though I purchased monthly passes (girl scout drop-out's honor), My light rail ticket was checked a grand total of two times in the four months I rode twice a week. While the light rail's conditions haven't been awful, it seems like the MTA is all people can complain about sometimes. But if the light rail has an actual ridership of 36,000, people are riding it, it just isn't getting better. We may need a new plan.
Why wasn't Mfume available for comment? There is nothing about him not returning phone calls or e-mails, nor declining comment on the topic. What does this mean for the upcoming election? Who is "bent on denying Mayor Stephanie Rawlings-Blake an elective term of office?" Why?
This is good journalism for an introductory high school student learning to write a lede with the 5 Ws and H and a story with very little information. These types of stories are often released by new websites to break a story first or let their readers know they are aware of a topic. But to be good journalism, they must be replaced or added on to for an overall picture and greater detail.
NewsTrust doesn't seem to trust Investigative Voice. Why only show negative examples from a news source?
Why should good journalism pander to an inattentive audience?
This article, although rather lengthy, was well-written and included lots of relevant information. The journalists included lots of facts and good sources to back up their findings, and it is obvious they did a fair amount of research to dig into the Baltimore lead program. It is a shame that such a huge program that would be so beneficial to so many Baltimore residents is now going unfunded, but this article gives great insight as to where the problem lies and how issues regarding ... More »
It is sort of lengthy. Do you think it would have worked better broken up into capsules?
You’re absolutely right calling this story a rumor. Gossip can be newsworthy, but you have to back it up with the facts.
I wish the reporters had spoken with families who live in homes with lead paint that have yet to be fixed. They are the people who will suffer from administrative incompetence, and their voices deserve to be heard.
Good example of a news source using transparency to validate thoughts on a subject that will be covered in the near future.
"I interviewed numerous people ... who played key roles in text4baby..." Just not the mothers who have tried it.
Instead of pulling a wire story, the Sun should have reported on this ruling in terms of the B'More for Healthy Babies initiative, which has similar goals and would be more pertinent to their audience.
Fantastic idea of what an editorial should be: Slightly opinionated with facts to back up those who would disagree or agree with the journalist's opinion.
The story was closer to a cute feature on the first lady than any kind of informational piece on her initiatives.
The article does not mention much about the B'More Healthy Babies initiative, as I would assume that's what sparked this story idea.
This story is based on the city's plans, but there is no mention of the thoughts or opinions of those who will be affected.
I wish the journalist covering this story had talked to some of the women who dropped out of the program. It would have added to the story to see why they couldn't stick with the initiative and double as watchdog reporting that could get back to the government to help make program changes.
How can you write a news story and not quote a single source from your own interviews? Very weak journalism.
When going on a vacation, no one wants to think about the dark side of sunny days. Should the president's family be any different? Even the president deserves a vacation, but like any good journalist, keep a wary eye on his surroundings.





Is most of this story missing due to the new paywall system? Ironic: The place J-school students are trying to learn how to be better reporters isn't affordable to J-school students. Or most journalists for that matter. How can the industry change if it's not even helping itself?