Brian Hradsky
Member (since February 2011)I am Brian Hradsky a Mass Comm major at Towson University. I already finished up the requirements for my broadcast certificate and will be graduating in the spring.
This story is great but is extremely boring. The story is way too long for the content. It is very much news but needs to be shorter to keep peoples attention. The Sources are great and informative but it is hard to read.
This article was excellent, it was a bit long but hit on many different things and was extremely well sourced. It was also very well written but it is easy to overlook errors when articles are so long. That being said I thought it could have been broken up.
Yes Tim Wheeler does a very good job from the articles that I have read.
Yes they could have elaborated a little bit more.
I completely agree with you Lauren. It was obvious from the first reference to Adam Jones.
Great article, experts cited balanced and very informative. They have plenty of of experts speaking and provide tons of information. It is a bit long but it serves it's purpose.
I really like this article, it is short and too the point and has multiple expert sources from both sides of the story. It is well written and insightful. It could have been more detailed but I think it is short enough to keep the readers attention.
This articles biggest flaw is that it has first person and completely gives away the writers view. It's hard to take an article seriously after it does that but it was well sourced and the overall quality of the article saved it. That being said it was an opinion piece but it just seemed like it was written like a story.
I think this is a good article. It lacks an expert source but it is well written and has good links. It is very informative I got a lot of information from it.
I thought this was a terrible article. They use Obama as a bait and switch. The article is overall poor and hard to follow. It is completely lacking sources.





Baltimore loses federal lead-paint funding
I wish the reporters had spoken with families who live in homes with lead paint that have yet to be fixed. They are the people who will suffer from administrative incompetence, and their voices deserve to be heard.
Well said.