The article jumped around too much for it to make a coeherent argument. I also cuaght some errors, "Residents who were prepared their name". Also I think it is a rather ridiculous statement to claim that the President has no idea that illigal immigration is an issue in our counrty and on Martha's Vineyard in particular.
Yes this is good jourlansim. The story has a strong anicdotal lead that comes full circle. The facts are presented clearly and fairly and support the argument. It is obvious that there are too many unkempt homes in Baltimore.